He’s not mounted straight on looking straight forward. It looks like he’s got it nailed to me, including the detail you pointed out.I'm going to be picky here, bare with me.
For the eyes the one one his Right the white part of the eye is showing in the back, and on The left one it's showing in the front. Just saying that semitry and details like that are rarely missed by the ones that don't know any better. I'm not knocking your ability, the work is great. If you put it in a show, the judges would see that you would get some point deductions.
I think he got that detail exactly right….He’s not mounted straight on looking straight forward. It looks like he’s got it nailed to me, including the detail you pointed out.